Wednesday, November 16, 2005

been working on a new larger (abt 20" x 20") concrete piece for the last few days, and i thot i would post a section of it here and see if any discussion came of it. instead of the tight, logo-like pieces that i have been exploring in "chains" (pieces which have been in NO presses' chains and MODL's fflij and i think in dandelion), ive been letting the image wander a bit away from structure into a more improvisational form. this piece is on hold onto i return from winnipeg on saturday, but i do plan on working on others while gone...


Blogger ryan said...

Like I told you earlier, very invocative of *Carnival* but cleaner. I think this is an interesting direction because very few people have attempted the visual long poem (though I know you're a little resistant to the idea of "long poem). All I can say is to keep going.

8:14 AM  
Blogger Jonathan Ball said...

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11:47 AM  
Blogger Jonathan Ball said...

to the visual long poem!! that is a great idea -- or maybe, to accomodate derek's resistance -- a "broad" poem. i agree with ryan -- keep going, and see where the letters lead you.

11:49 AM  
Blogger Jill said...

I object to the use of the term "broad."

It could be a visual woman poem. But that's just as bad.

Ha ha!

11:05 AM  

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